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Tuesday, 4 December 2007

I FEEL


I feel so alone

I feel so less

I feel so void

I feel so depressed

I feel so low

supressed under lonliness

I feel the need

I feel i want

a feeling that speaks

for itself

and makes me its own

in this feeling of solitude

I feel i want someone to know

that i also

.

.

.

....feel..



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6 comments:

  1. Abhishek4 December 2007 at 20:11

    those lines imply sadness .. smthng that's been buried deep inside .. smthng u cant confront that easily ..
    wow !! .. that can help smbdy overcome that inner truth .. amazing lines !!

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  2. Anonymous10 December 2007 at 00:30

    gud job but i think u shoud rite something lighter tooooooo......keep up da good work...

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  3. Aks25 December 2007 at 20:49

    these lines are few but still say soooo much....i guess everyone,on some level or the other, can and will connect to it....amazing work!.....the way it ended actually made me miss a breath!

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  4. Anonymous6 January 2008 at 21:42

    u should'nt feel alone
    shun dat lonliness
    fill dat void spaces
    theres sumthin 2 b impressed
    gought to fly higher
    supress dat lonliness
    shuld fulfill ur need
    satisfy ur insatiable want
    coz feelings r ment 2 speak
    no need to make ne1 know
    bcoz..........eyes says it all....

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  5. Hina Chopra6 January 2008 at 22:01

    the person who has commented last..kept himself as anonymous..whos that?i would love to thank u ..they are beautiful lines..they r wnderful wrds..!would love to know who u are...!thanks once again..

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  6. Anonymous1 March 2008 at 01:01

    this is exactly how i feel.. nd dat email said exctly this... i want someone to knw that i feel...

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