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Thursday 19 April 2012

Look..


It rained last night..
it brought back the plight
the plight of the sight.
Sight of the drops of rain
which settle at the leaves
and slide down to fall on my face.

I feel them & their touch
the cool reaches my heart
makes me love
 my life..

 They fall harder..
I step out from under the tree
with a wish to feel free.

Everything goes dry
the moment i hit a stone
& say,
"excuse me.."

The plight begins and the sight ends
when I hear..
can't u see..???


I go back
under the tree
with a wish..
a wish that I could see
the raindrops settle at the leaves
& slide down to fall
on my face
just standing under the tree....

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24 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 September 2007 at 19:50

    Omg!
    It's darn good.
    I love it.

    And..
    the smile doesn't hate you.
    It's a misconception.
    :]

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  2. Abhishek13 November 2007 at 18:47

    my personal fav among them ...
    simply awesome

    deep meanings and true

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  3. Hina Chopra13 November 2007 at 21:39

    thnx abhishek..

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  4. Anonymous6 January 2008 at 22:39

    u hit da stone
    n every thin went dry..
    don't u think it was 4 u 2 retry
    coz dis time it was natures try
    2 make u deprive
    of sorrows r cries
    2 fill u wid love happiness n joy
    its possible if u give it a chance
    take a glance on a hopefully true stance
    beautifully hooked up 2 get sum romance
    take ur feelings 2 another degree of protance....
    but still i donno y
    i get dat feeling so melancholy
    my efforts will get deried
    n u'll continue 2 fill dis blog
    wid poems of grief n cry....
    untill u realize what my lips can't tell u.....
    donno y.....
    mayb
    coz
    "eyes says it all".....

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  5. Hina Chopra7 January 2008 at 16:01

    who is this..please tell me..would really love to know you...wonderful comments..thank you once agin...

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  6. Anonymous7 January 2008 at 18:09

    hhhmmm u wanna know...
    but think i don hav 2 show,
    u should not stop da
    tries,
    1 day u'll recognize,
    not here 4 fame
    i love dat game,
    but da thing i wanna say....
    ma eyes says it all, except my name.....

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  7. Hina Chopra9 January 2008 at 21:30

    well..i sure will..recognise..but..yes even if i dnt knw who u are...or maybe i do..i just wana say..thank u..fr ur comments..nd yes..u write really well too!still wud love 2 knw u..tc.thnks 1ce again..

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  8. Hina Chopra9 January 2008 at 21:45

    nd moreover..i think life is too short to wait fr "one day" to come..but if u wish u keep ur idemtity in dark..ur choice..thanks anyway..!!

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  9. Anonymous10 January 2008 at 15:54

    its not dat i wanna hide...
    i want u 2 recognize,
    n win da prize...
    more so ur words r 2 my delite
    coz i think i m not as gud as u write...
    think i'll wait 2 unfold da reel,
    give u another chance 2 feel,
    maybe dis time u can steel...
    "coz my eyes says it all 4 real"...

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  10. Hina Chopra10 January 2008 at 22:13

    well..wat cn i say..u nt as gud as i write..i wud like 2 contradict that!but..still..too less of a memeory..nd bad a t guessing maeks me stand at a weak position wen u ask me "recognise"....bani?no..i dnt knw..am serious..leme knw..its nt goin 2 wrk ths way..i will nevr b able 2 gues..its bettr if u "reveal" urself buddy..nd let me judge u nd the sayin of ur eyes..!!!

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  11. Hina Chopra10 January 2008 at 22:32

    anubhav?
    nitin?abhishek?aanchal? manan? meghna? ...dude..ths is nt wrking..i dunno..mayb u r one among them..tell me yar..hadd ho gai..!!anywya...ur wish at the end of the day..tk cr..

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  12. Anonymous10 January 2008 at 22:55

    i m not a gal,
    hav ma own style...
    nor in ur cllge,
    so dat's out of da file...
    u don know me much,coz i m not ur frend...
    so u shud start thinking out of da trend...
    but still i m in front of ur eye(i)
    u just has 2 apply,
    but don waste ur skills,
    on dez things allrite...
    just study 4 ur exams,
    so u don loose ur pride...
    after dat u'll hav time 2 realize,
    i think u r in 4 a bit of surprize...
    n 2 recognize u don hav 2 read what i write...
    "jus see ma eyes"
    coz eyes says.......

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  13. Hina Chopra11 January 2008 at 21:13

    ok..atleast.tht i know..tht i dnt knw u..!!anyway..yes..i wud hv bin in fr a srprise even if i new u don wry..but wat pricks me is..tht if u r nt a girl..u r NOT my friend..u r nt in my college..hw do U knw me??nd hw did u even hear of my blog..and most of all..hw can u b infrnt of my eye..?????????!!

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  14. Hina Chopra11 January 2008 at 21:16

    and yes with all these things in place..if u think i can recognise u..nd win d prize..hehe u in fr a major misconception!! my exmz r in any case gonna go into the well..so...if u waitin fr them 2 end..u dnt have to..!and i m serious..

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  15. Anonymous11 January 2008 at 21:57

    all my efforts go in vain i know but still dis is specially 4 ya......

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  16. Anonymous11 January 2008 at 22:11

    u gotta do it, gotta try..
    no matter how many difficulties imply...
    suppress others & pass dem by,
    focus ur energies 2 touch da sky...
    i know u can't fly,nor u can jump so high,
    but if u try winds may make u rely...
    storms will come rains will plum,
    clouds will thunder n make u wonder...
    r u gonna reach dat high??
    inspite u shud really try,
    clutch dat branch
    which will turn ur worries n cry into happiness n joy...
    den u'll c da sky bow in front of ur eye...
    so never stop ur try!!!
    coz i'll c dat in ur eye,
    as u know eyes says....
    n u do well r my prays....

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  17. Hina Chopra12 January 2008 at 20:04

    ok how abt let me guess widd a few hints..??maybe i m able to..bt wid the conditions u set in..i doubt it....bt still wrth a try..nd yess thnx fr ur prayers..

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  18. Anonymous12 January 2008 at 21:29

    u know what dat was ment 2 make u believe dat if u try ur exams r gonna go well....n i think i m distracting u....hw stupid i m? so now i'll write only on ur nxt post....n u'll know me soon....but i m not da one u wud probably think!!!!

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  19. Anonymous12 January 2008 at 21:44

    still i think i'll make it ryme today....



    i m not da 1 u think about,
    i m not da 1 who make u shout....
    i m not da 1 who take ur stand,
    not da 1 who hold ur hand....
    i m not da 1 u desire,
    coz my eyes r not filled wid fire....
    i m not da 1 u respect,
    not da 1 u circumspect....
    but i don want 2 put u in vain,
    nor i want 2 feel da pain....
    now i think i should cut it short,
    coz 4 u it can b a heavy cost....
    rest my eyes will say,
    n u'll see dem definitely 1 day....

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  20. Hina Chopra13 January 2008 at 13:15

    haha..thts obvious..coz as i told u mr anonymous..tht i will nvr know who u are..coz the realities are just to great to imagine!!!and ofcrse my examz r gonna go well..(i think so)but..yeah..i not knowing u is distracting me more than knowing you would leme tell u that!!but still..yet again i say..its ur wish!! i hate curiosity..nd suspense..!it kills me makes me go mad thinking..so..hahaha anyway...

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  21. Hina Chopra13 January 2008 at 13:21

    i am telling u break the suspense that would be easier fr me..much easier!!!! ;)

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  22. Anonymous13 January 2008 at 19:32

    TEST

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  23. Hina Chopra14 January 2008 at 22:24

    TEST????

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  24. Anonymous14 January 2008 at 22:45

    oh so some1 else also commented as anonymous.....!!

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